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Post by EMSOUP on Fri Mar 22, 2013 5:02 pm

This thread is about the review session of this: https://lccg.forumotion.com/t1687-lccg-cardmaking-competition-march-2013-version contest.

Rule for Review:
1. Review format is:
-Theme Review + 1 to 10 rating for these categories: Creativity, Personal Opinion
-Individual cards review + 1 to 10 rating for each cards for these categories: Balance, Usability, Interaction, and Creativity
-Deck Review + 1 to 10 rating for these categories: Usability and Creativity
-Overall review + 1 to 10 rating for these categories: Balance, Usability, Personal Opinion.
Then, add the final score for that person. The final score per person is the average of all the scores above.


Score Guideline:
1 is Ultimite Dragon God Tier of crappyness
2-4 is meh
5-6 is average, should be better
7-8 is good, but can be better
9 is great
10 is the pinnacle of card design.

Spoiler the review for each person, and you must quote the post that you're reviewing.

2. Review Session will be closed on 14th April, the result will be announced on the 16th of April.

3. Any Member of LCCG can join the reviewing session, but the participants is obliged to. And atleast there must be 2 review for each submission, if on the deadline its not fulffilled, the deadline will be extended. And at least each participant must review 2 submissions.

4. Each card must be reviewed. every single one.

5. Deck review can be done either by testing, OR by theory.

6. Yes, there's a personal opinion category there. Use it well.

7. It's better if you write your thought on why you rated it that way. not mandatory though. Except for lower rating than 7, it's mandatory.

That's all that I can remember to write now.

This thread is now open for the reviews. Questions better be posted via PM.


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Post by Seattleite on Fri Mar 22, 2013 6:35 pm

Darkest Hour:

quote:

Darkest Hour wrote:
Monsters:

|Ikazuchiryu|7|USV1|Dragon|Light|4||1930|1400|Magestic and unparalleled, these dragons carry the force of an ocean-wide lightning storm in their wake, and are capable of leveling their foes with lightning bolt strong enough to completely incinerate their foes.|

|Grimlock Hellspark Dragon|8|USV1|Dragon|Fire|4||1950|1600|It will burn it's anathema until it is nothing but ashes. Then it will burn the ashes until they are nothing but dust. It will even burn the dust until the area surrounding it is reduced to nothing.|

|Lazulian Sapphire Dragon|0|CMCP|Dragon|Earth|4||1800|2100|An extremely rare and powerful dragon, with a chitonous and brilliant lapis lazuli hide, capable of repelling the most powerful attacks.|

|Cyclopean Hellscar Wyvern|0|CMCP|Dragon|Dark|4||1500|1000|When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 Normal Dragon-type Monster from your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, increase the ATK and DEF of all Normal Dragon-type Monsters you control by 500.|

|Ethereal Shield Wyvern|0|CMCP|Dragon|Dark|4||1400|1000|Tribute this face-up card: Special Summon 1 Normal Dragon-type Monster from your deck.|

|Primordial Netherdragon|0|CMCP|Dragon|Dark|7||2950|2600|Born within a world parallel to others, it's mere existence weakens the boundaries between. It can emerge from nothingness, and drag anything alive into a plane of death and void.|

|Shinryu's Handmaiden|0|CMCP|Dragon/Effect|Wind|7||250|200|During your Main Phase 1, while you control a face-up Normal Dragon-type Monster, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand.|

Spells/Traps:

|Code of the Dragonborn|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Normal Dragon-type Monster from your hand.|
|Piazzo Shower|0|CMCP|Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Discard 1 card: negate the Summon of an opponent's monster and destroy it. If that monster is Level 5 or higher, draw 1 card.|
|Dragon's Thunderbolt|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Activate this card if you control a Dragon-type Monster: destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field.|
|Blade of the East|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Equip|||Increase the equipped monster's ATK by 500. When the equipped monster inflicts battle damage, an additional 700 effect damage is also inflicted.|
|Hellfire Cocktail|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Increase the ATK and DEF of all Normal Monsters you control by 1000.|
|Opaque Rampage|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Increase the ATK of 1 monster you control by 1500 until the End Phase. If it is used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon, draw 1 card.|
|Dragon's Thunder|0|CMCP|Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Activate this card when the opponent declares an attack against a Normal Dragon-type Monster: negate the attack and banish the attacking monster. You gain 1000 Life Points.|
|Draconian Berserker Barrage|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Until the End Phase, when a Dragon-type Monster destroys an opponent's card in battle or with it's effect, you draw 1 card.|
|Unfailing Strength|0|CMCP|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||During each player's Standby Phase, increase the ATK of all Dragon-type Monsters on the field by 200.|
|Ethereal Blade|0|CMCP|Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. You take 600 damage for every "Ethereal Blade" in your Graveyard.|
|Suicide Drop|0|CMCP|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. You take 1000 damage for every "Suicide Drop" Spell Card in your Graveyard.|

Extra Deck:

|Shinryu|0|CMCP|Dragon/Xyz/Effect|Light|7||3000|2500|2 Level 7 Dragon-type Monsters When this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle, it becomes an Xyz Material for this card. As long as this card has 5 or more Xyz Materials, it cannot be destroyed.|
|Man Machine Interface|0|CMCP|Machine/Xyz|Earth|4||2350|500|2 Level 4 Monsters|
|Physicist, Destroyer of the False|0|CMCP|Machine/Xyz/Effect|Earth|4||1700|1200|2 Level 4 Monsters You can remove an Xyz Material from this card to destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. |
|Thundernova Dragonlord|0|CMCP|Dragon/Fusion/Effect|Fire|9||3900|3500|Ikazuchiryu + Grimlock Hellspark Dragon This card can be Fusion Summoned by sending it's fusion materials from the hand or field to the Graveyard. When this card is Fusion Summoned, destroy 2 cards your opponent controls.|
|Primordial Ultinether Dragon|0|CMCP|Dragon/Fusion/Effect|Dark|12||4850|4500|Primordial Netherdragon + Primordial Netherdragon This card can be Fusion Summoned by sending it's fusion materials from the hand or field to the Graveyard.|

Deck:

M
x3 Primordial Netherdragon
x3 Shinryu's Handmaiden
x3 Ikazuchiryu
x3 Grimlock Hellspark Dragon
x3 Lazulian Sapphire Dragon
x3 Cyclopean Hellscar Wyvern
x3 Ethereal Shield Wyvern

S/T
x3 Code of the Dragonborn
x2 Piazzo Shower
x2 Dragon's Thunderbolt
x2 Blade of the East
x2 Hellfire Cocktail
x3 Opaque Rampage
x3 Ethereal Blade
x3 Suicide Drop

Extra
x3 Primordial Ultinether Dragon
x3 Man Machine Interface
x3 Shinryu
x3 Thundernova Dragonlord
x3 Physicist, Destroyer of the False

Theme:

Creativity: 9 (Amazing lore and names for a vanilla deck, spells/traps/extra support a little lackluster)
Personal Opinion: 9
Individual:

Ikazuchiryu
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Grimlock Hellspark Dragon
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Lazulian Sapphire Dragon
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Cyclopean Hellscar Wyvern
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Ethereal Shield Wyvern
Balance: 7 (just sort of jackpot-y. outclasses other cards)
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 7 (lonefire blossom)

Primordial Netherdragon
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Shinryu's Handmaiden
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

---SPELLS-----

Code of the Dragonborn
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 8 (a little bland)

Piazzo Shower
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Dragon's Thunderbolt
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Blade of the East
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Hellfire Cocktail
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Opaque Rampage
Balance: 7 (draw is OK but 1500 is too much)
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Dragon's Thunder
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Draconian Berserker Barrage
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Unfailing Strength
Balance: 10
Usability: 8 (the other stat boosting cards are a little better)
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Ethereal Blade
Balance: 8 (can easily just run 1)
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Suicide Drop
Balance: 6 (can easily just run 1, worse because cheap monster destruction)
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

----EXTRA-----

Shinryu:
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Man Machine Interface:
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 9 (flavor would be nice)

Physicist, Destroyer of the False
Balance: 8 (insta bomb of 2 backrows, might be better as once per turn)
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 8 (a little bland)

Thundernova Dragonlord:
Balance: 5 (too easy to get out with your searchers, too much ATK)
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Primordial Ultinether Dragon
Balance: 10
Usability: 10
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10
Deck:

Usability: 10 (Solid, provides support in all areas I can think of)
Creativity: 8 (Simplistic Creativity but no surprises)
Overall:

Balance: 8
Usability: 10
Personal Opinion: 9
Creativity: 9

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Post by Seattleite on Sat Mar 23, 2013 7:44 am

I don't really know how to rate for "Personal Opinion" or how to rate differently for Theme and Overall creativity.

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Post by EMSOUP on Sun Mar 24, 2013 4:55 pm

Removed overall creativity since its stacks with theme creativity. personal opinion is personal opinion. and major update on OP with a new deadline and several added guidelines. please read the OP, it'll save lives.
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Post by Anime Girl References on Sun Mar 24, 2013 7:19 pm



Spoiler:
Deathtouch Slitherer, Tempest Rider, Fissure Melanostomus, Deviant Kraken and Abyssfriller (all recieved the same score)
Balance:10
Usability:10
Interaction:10
Creativity:10


Nautical Disasserpent
Balance: 10
Usability: 9 (Chainable S/Ts ignore this card's effect)
Interaction: 10
Creativity: 10

Climb Slime
Balance:10
Usability:6 (There are not very many cards that destroy face-downs due to balance issues, and this card will only work when it's face-down.)
Interaction:10
Creativity:10

Spellgaze
Balance:5 (Having two face-up "Spellgaze" nullifies all S/T removal completely, which could make multiple lockdowns unbreakable)
Usability:7 (Is an equip spell card that does not attribute any bonuses to the equipped monster)
Interaction:10
Creativity:10

Rotten Egg of Regeneration, Lab Research Sarcophagus, Pelagic Zone (all recieved same score)
Balance:10
Usability:10
Interaction:10
Creativity:10
Cross-Bearing Whirlpool, Devour and Destroy, A Challenger Approaches, and Solarnova (all recieved the same score)
Balance:10
Usability:10
Interaction:10
Creativity:10


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Post by DIGITAL on Mon Mar 25, 2013 5:17 am

as it turns out, to properly Quote you need to unlock the last thread
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Post by EMSOUP on Tue Mar 26, 2013 2:42 pm

SoulFire wrote:
Monsters:

|Psychotic Gypsie|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|6||2400|1800|This card can be Special Summoned from your hand during the End-Phase of a turn that your opponent did not summon a monster. When this card declares a direct attack, your opponent must discard a card or pay 500 Life Points.|

|Wandering Eye|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|6||2700|1600|When your opponent draws a card, you can pay 500 Life Points to have them reveal the card. Based on the card type shown, activate one of the following effects: -Monster: Both players can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from their hand. -Spell: Both players discard 1 random Card from their hand. -Trap: Both players draw 1 card.|

|Mind Gazer|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|4||1800|1400|You can discard this card from your hand when your opponent has 4 or more cards in their hand. Your opponent reveals thier hand; select 1 card for them to discard.|

|Kinetic Genius|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|4||1400|1700|While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot draw cards if they have more than 4 cards in their hand. At the end of your opponents turn, they lose Life Points equal to 100x the number of cards in their hand.|

|Forgotten Oracle|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|3||1600|1100|While this card is in your hand or in the graveyard, you can Banish it to have your opponent discard 1 card for each monster they have face-up on the field.|

|Control Freak|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|3||1300|1200|Once per turn you can pay 500 Life Points to declare 1 card type (Monster, Spell, or Trap). Your opponent must discard every card of the declared type at the end of the turn. If your opponent has less than 3 cards in their hand at the end of a turn, destroy this card.|

|Friendly Seer|0||Psychic/Effect|Light|3||1200|1500|When this monster is summoned, Special Summon a level 4 or lower Psychic-type monster from your hand, it's effects are negated and it cannot be used as materials for a Synchro Summon. If this card is the only card you control, you can pay 500 LP to have both you and your opponent discard 1 card.|
Spells:

|Echoing Screams|0||Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||At the end of each turn, your opponent must discard 1 card if they have more cards in their hand than on the field.|

|Passable Toll Gate|0||Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||During the End-Phase, the turn player can choose to discard up to 3 cards from their hand or pay 500 Life Points.|

|Mystic Reckoning|0||Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||At the start of your turn, all Face-Up monsters you control gain ATK equal to 100x the number of cards in your opponents hand.|

|Famine|0||Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Activate this card if your opponent has less cards in their hand than you; Inflict 750 damage to your opponent.|

|Rehabilitation Through Suffering|0||Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Activate this card if your opponent has less than 5 cards in their hand. Special Summon 1 monster from your graveyard.|

|Mental Reflection|0||Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Draw or discard cards until your hand is the same number of cards as your opponents.|
Traps:
|Mind Splatter|0||Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Activate this card when your opponent draws a card. During the End-Phase of the turn This card is activated, your opponent losses Life Points equal to 200x the number of cards in their hand.|

|Psyche Blast|0||Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Activate this card when an opponents monster declares an attack on a monster you control; your opponent discards or draws cards so their hand matches the level of the attacking monster (Max of 7).|

|Spreading Infection|0||Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||During the End-Phase of your opponents turn, they must draw or discard cards until their hand is the same size as yours.|

|Brain Freeze|0||Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Negate the effect of a card. Your opponent cannot activate the effect of cards of the same type (Monster, Spell, or Trap) until the end-phase of their next turn.|
Extra Deck:

|Mind Crafter|0||Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Light|3||1800|1600|(Xyz) 2 Level 3 Monsters - Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material off this card to draw 1 card, if it is a spell or trap card, you can discard it to have your opponent discard 1 card.|

|Memory Guardian|0||Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Light|3||1900|2100|(Xyz) 3 Level 3 Monsters - When a monster would be Summoned, OR when a Spell Card, Trap Card, or monster effect is activated that includes an effect that Special Summons a monster(s): detach 3 Xyz Materials off this card; negate the Summon or activation, and if you do, destroy that card.|

|Psi-Breaker|0||Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Light|4||?|?|(Xyz) 2 Level 4 Monsters - This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your opponents graveyard x 300. When your opponent draws a card, you can detach 1 Xyz Material off this card to have your opponent discard 1 card at random from their hand.|

|Telekinetic Blaster|0||Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Light|3||2300|1300|(Xyz) 3 Level 3 Monsters - If a Psychic-Type monster would be destroyed, you can pay Life Points and Detch 1 Xyz Material instead.|

|Power Builder|0||Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Light|6||2300|1500|(Xyz) 2 Level 6 Monsters - When ever a Psychic-Type monster is destroyed by battle, it becomes an Xyz Material for this card. When your opponent discards a card, you gain Life Points equal to the number of Xyz Materials on this card x 100.|

|Brekons, Mind Sculptor|0||Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Light|6||2900|3000|(Xyz) 3 Level 6 Monsters - At the end a players turn, they must draw or discard cards so their hand has the same number of cards as their opponent; you may detach 1 Xyz Material off this card to activate one of the following effects based on whether cards were drawn or discarded: -Drawn: Target 1 Psychic-Type monster in your graveyard and shuffle it into your deck. -Discarded: Target 1 Psychic-Type monster in your graveyard and attach it to this card as Xyz Material.|
Deck:

Monsters:(16)
1|Psychotic Gypsie
2|Wandering Eye
2|Mind Gazer
3|Kinetic Genius
3|Forgotten Oracle
3|Control Freak
2|Friendly Seer


Spells: (12)
2|Echoing Screams
2|Passable Toll
2|Mystic Reckoning
2|Famine
2|Rehabilitation Through Suffering
2|Mental Reflection


Traps: (12)
3|Mind Splatter
3|Psyche Blast
3|Spreading Infection
3|Brain Freeze


Xyz: (15)
3|Mind Crafter
3|Memory Guardian
3|Psi-Breaker
3|Telekinetic Blaster
2|Power Builder
1|Brekons, Mind Sculptor



gonna finish the review later.
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