Active Retribution

Active Retribution - AVRN

10 cards each.
Leo and EMSOUP may submit Archetypes (10 cards max) included in their submissions.
Set closes 30th August.

Submissions are open. If you edit a card, edit it in your original submission post and make another post specifying what you edited.

Additionally, in this thread people who have volunteered to review submissions can discuss a suitable time to review together.

|Essence Archfiend|0|AVRN|Fiend/Tuner|Dark|4||1600|0|When you have 2 or more Banished "Essence" monsters and draw this card, you can reveal it to Special Summon it. When this card is Banished, if you have 2 or more "Essence" Monsters in your Graveyard: you can Banish 1 "Essence" card from Graveyard; Special Summon this monster.|

|Essence Undead Commander|0|AVRN|Zombie/Synchro/Effect|Dark|8||3200|2700|1 "Essence" Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner(s) - When this monster is Synchro Summoned you can select up to 3 "Essence" monsters from your Graveyard and Banish them. This card cannot be targeted for the effect of a card or an attack as long as at-least 1 other "Essence" monster remains on your side of the field.|

|Essence Electric Eel|0|AVRN|Sea Serpent/Xyz/Effect|Light|4||2700|2100|3 Level 4 "Essence" Monsters - Once per turn, When an "Essence" monster would be Banished: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; send that monster to your Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters ATK. While this card is face-up on the field, all "Essence" monsters gain ATK equal to 100x the number of Banished "Essence" monsters.|

|Ampule of Duality|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Discard 1 card; Reveal 3 level 4 or lower LIGHT monsters with different names from your Deck: your opponent chooses 1 to add to your hand, then shuffle the rest back into your Deck. You can only activate 1 "Ampule of Duality" per turn. You cannot Special Summon during the turn you activate this card.|

|Clandestine Paranormal Awakened Being|0|AVRN|Psychic/Effect|Dark|4||1800|200|When this card is Special Summoned from your Graveyard: You can send 1 level 4 or lower Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster from your Hand or Deck to the Graveyard. You can return 1 "Clandestine" or "Paranormal" Monster you control to your hand, other than "Clandestine Paranormal Awakened Being" to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster from your graveyard.|

|Clandestine Paranormal Auracaster|0|AVRN|Spellcaster/Effect|Fire|3||1300|1200|When a Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster, other than "Clandestine Paranormal Auracaster", would be discarded or sent to the Graveyard (by battle or card effect); you can discard this card: add that card to your hand instead. When a "Clandestine" or "Paranormal" monster you control is destroyed by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK or DEF.|

|Clandestine Paranormal Blood Bender|0|AVRN|Psychic/Effect|Water|4||1600|1400|When this card is Summoned you can Discard 1 Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster, pay 500 Life Points, and add 1 level 4 or lower "Clandestine" or "Paranormal" monster from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Clandestine" or "Paranormal" Monster to target 1 monster on the field. That target cannot declare an attack, change battle positions, or be targeted by other card effects until your next Stand-by phase.|

|Circle of Mind and Magic|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Target 1 Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster you control and 1 Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster in your Graveyard; destroy the first monster, and if you do, Special Summon the second monster from your Graveyard. You can only activate 1 "Circle of Mind and Magic" per turn.|

|Fractured Memory|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||If you control no monsters: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Psychic or Spellcaster-type monster from your Deck. You can only activate 1 "Fractured Memory" per turn. You cannot Normal Summon/Set during the turn you activate this card.|

|Fazur Diaphragm|0|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|4||1950|1700|When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can return this card to the hand.|

|Fazur Emolga|1|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|4||1700|1000|When a “Fazur” monster you control is returned to your hand (except Fazur Emolga): Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Special Summoned by this effect; Add 1 "Fazur" monster from your Deck to your hand, except "Fazur Emolga".|

|Fazur Explorer|2|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|3||1450|1450|When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card: Negate the effect and activate one of the following effects: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card they control OR Discard 1 card from their hand. You can only activate this effect once per turn. When this face-up card is returned to your hand by the effect of a “Fazur” card; Banish 1 card in your opponent’s Graveyard.|

|Fazur Photon|3|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|2||700|900|Banish this card from your Graveyard, hand or field; Return 1 face-up “Fazur” monster you control to your hand. If this effect successfully resolves; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower “Fazur” Monster from your Graveyard.|

|Fazur Volt|4|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|4||1400|0|When this card is Summoned; Select 1 Monster your opponent controls: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, that monster’s effect is negated and it cannot attack.|

|Fazur Reaper|5|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|1||100|100|When a face-up "Fazur" monster you control is returned to the hand: Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. |

|Fazur Gamma|6|AVRN|Fiend/Effect|Light|6||2400|2000|When this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a “Fazur” monster: Your opponent cannot activate Monster effects until your next Standby Phase. After this card battles: return this card to your hand; send 1 "Fazur" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard.|

|Fazur Dolga|7|AVRN|Fiend/Xyz/Effect|Light|4||2200|2100|2 "Fazur" Monsters Detach 1 Xyz Material monster from this card: Return 1 "Fazur" monster you control to the hand; Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls.|

|Fazur Dynamite|8|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Return 1 “Fazur” monster you control to your hand: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.|

|Fazur Factory|9|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||When a “Fazur” monster is Normal Summoned; You can pay 500 Life Points: Special Summon 1 “Fazur” monster from your hand or Graveyard.|

|Drunken King|0|AVRN|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||800|2100|During your End Phase, if you have activated a Spell or Trap card this turn and no other cards either player owned were affected by it, change this card to Defense Position to Draw 2 cards. You can only use the effect of "Drunken King" once per turn.|
|Lifeforce Castle|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||If a card(s) you control would be destroyed or removed from the field by a card effect, you can pay 1000 Life Points for each of those cards instead.|
|The Flying Buttress|0|AVRN|Rock/Effect|Earth|3||900|1900|When your Spell or Trap card(s) would be removed from the field by a card effect, you can discard this card instead (in the middle of a chain) and draw 1 card.|
|Spiteful Gain|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Counter|||Activate only when a card effect that draws card(s) or adds card(s) from the Deck to the Hand is activated. Negate and destroy it, then draw the same number of card(s) that would have been drawn or added.|
|Ionized Angler|0|AVRN|Fish/Effect|Water|5||2200|1300|If your opponent controls a monster with 2000 ATK or more: You can Special Summon this card. Each time a Thunder-Type monster is sent to the Graveyard or Banished: You can place 1 "Ion" counter on a card on the field. Cards with "Ion" counters have their effect negated and lose 400 ATK and DEF for each counter (if a monster). If a Fish-type monster destroys a monster with an Ion counter in battle: Add 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck to your Hand with a level less than or equal to the number of counters on that card. You can banish 2 Fish-Type monsters in your Graveyard; Add this card from your Graveyard to your hand.|
|Shadow Remnants|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||Once per turn: You can target 1 Banished DARK monster; Return it to the owner's Deck and Special Summon 1 Banished DARK monster (from either player) with an equal or lower level to your side of the field.|
|Calling the Brotherhood|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||When a monster you control is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can banish it and Special Summon 1 Monster from your Deck with the same name. A Level 7 or Higher monster summoned by this effect has its effect(s) negated.|
|Mordre the Cessation of Humanity|0|AVRN|Zombie/Fusion/Effect|Dark|10||3000|0|“Turdak, the Embodiment of Disease” + “Stagnant Decay Soldier”. This card can only be fusion summoned by sending the above fusion material monsters to the Graveyard. The Summon and Effect of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Fusion Summoned, banish the top 8 cards of your opponent's Deck. |
|Sealer of Ruin|0|AVRN|Beast/Effect|Water|2||700|400|If this card is in the Graveyard and was sent there from the field, During either player's turn, If your opponent activates a card effect that targets a card(s) you control: You can return this card from your Graveyard to the top of your Deck; Negate that effect and return 1 card your opponent controls to their Hand.  |
|Flesh-Lured Piranha|0|AVRN|Fish/Tuner/Effect|Water|1||800|0|If you control a Level 3 or lower Fish-Type monster: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. If this card is removed from the field after being summoned this way: Return it to the deck. You cannot Special Summon other monsters the turn you use this effect, except from your Extra Deck.|

|Apoxic Encephalopathy|a|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||While this card is face-up, destroy all face-up monsters whose DEF is less than 500.|

|Tenderizer|1|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||At the beginning of your Battle Phase, decrease the ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters your opponent controls by 400 for each FIRE or Pyro-type Monster you control.|

|Insanity Rush|2|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||As long as this card is face-up, all monsters you control gain 1000 ATK and DEF, but the effects of all other cards you control are negated.|

|Aura of Mistrust|4|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||When this card is activated, Pay 500 Life Points and choose a Level (1-12). As long as this card is face-up, all face-up monsters your opponent controls are being treated as that level. If your opponent Normal Summons a monster whose original Level is equal to the level you declared, draw 1 card.|

|Unafraid Tardigrade Brigade|0|AVRN|Rock/Effect|Earth|4||250|2200|This card is also treated as a Field Spell Card while in the deck, Graveyard or in your hand. During your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard, you can place it at the top of your deck. While face-up, Spell/Trap Card Zones can also be treated as Field Card Zones.|

|Cost Up|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||Pay 1000 Life Points: As long as this card is face-up, the Level of all monster cards in your opponent's hand is increased by 1.|

|Special Snowflake Melter|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||Pay 1000 Life Points. As long as this card is face-up, your opponent cannot Summon monsters who cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.|

|Justice of the Ravenous|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn. |

|Unemployment Check|1|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Discard 1 Effect monster in your hand that you cannot Normal Summon or Set: draw 2 cards.|

|Hurricane of Rejection|1|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||When a Monster is Summoned, roll a six-sided die and activate one of the following effects: *5 or lower: Return that monster to it's owner's hand. *6: Return all monsters on the field to their owner's hands.|

|Magic Reflect Force|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Counter|||Until the 2nd End Phase after activation, any Spell/Traps that would target a monster you control your opponent must target a monster they control as the target instead. You and your opponent must control at least 2 monsters to activate and resolve this effect. If neither player controls at least 2 monsters: Negate this effect during the End Phase of the current turn.|

|Warrior of Greed|0|AVRN|Warrior/Effect|Dark|4||1700|1000|If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can Tribute this card to draw 2 cards.|

|Zombie Summoner|0|AVRN|Zombie/Effect|Dark|1||0|0|You can Tribute this face-up monster to Special Summon 1 of your banished Zombie-Type monsters.|

|Dimension Infection|0||Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||When this card is activated: You can add 1 of your banished Zombie-Type monsters to your hand. All banished monsters become Zombie-Type.|

|Zombie Lord|0|AVRN|Zombie/Xyz/Effect|Dark|4||2300|0|3 Level 4 Zombie-Type monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 Level 5 or lower Zombie-Type monster that either player has banished; Special Summon that target in face-up Attack Position. This card must remain face-up on the field to activate and to resolve this effect.|

Replaced Whisper of temptation and Traitorous Queen of Wiltered Rose for Apocalyptic Golemeteor and Burning illusionist of Relinquishment

Replaced Iconoclasm with Unafraid Tardigrade Brigade.

|Aetherwind Psion|0|AVRN|Psychic/Synchro/Effect|Wind|7||2400|2700|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. While this card is face-up on the field: The effects of Psychic-Type monsters cannot be negated. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand: your opponent must banish 1 face-up card they control.|

|Sandshaping Sorcerer|0|AVRN|Spellcaster/Xyz/Effect|Earth|5||2500|700|2 Level 5 Monsters. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; shuffle up to 2 Monsters from your Graveyard into your Deck and Special Summon 1 "Sand Dune Golem Token (Rock/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 1500) for each Monster shuffled into your Deck by this effect. While you control a face-up "Golem" monster, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 face-up "Golem" Monster and return 1 card your opponent controls to its owners hand.|

|Unholy Hivemind|0|AVRN|Insect/Effect|Dark|3||1400|1300|You can discard this card in your hand: Send 1 "Unholy" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard, but you can not conduct your Battle Phase this turn or Special Summon a non-"Unholy" monster. When this card is banished: Draw 1 card.|

|Unholy Corpse|0|AVRN|Zombie/Effect|Dark|4||1800|1100|You can banish this card in your Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Unholy" monster that is banished (except this card). When it is removed from the field, return this card to your Graveyard.|

|Mind and Magic - Charge|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Tribute 1 face-up Psychic or Spellcaster-Type monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Clandestine" or "Paranormal" monster from your Graveyard, then apply one of the following effects based on the monster that was Summoned:
- "Clandestine" Send 1 "Clandestine" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard and gain 1000 Life Points.
- "Paranormal" Add 1 "Paranormal" card from your Deck to your hand, then discard 1 card.|

|Mausoleum from the Dimension of Despair|0||Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||Pay 1000 Life Points: All card effects that activate in the Graveyard are negated. During each End Phase; you can select 1 card in either players Graveyard: Banish it.|

|X-ACCESS|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||When an "X-" Dark Machine monster is added to your hand or Special Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Dark Machine monster from your hand or Graveyard. During your End Phase, you can shuffle any number of monsters in your Graveyard into your Deck and draw 1 card.|

|Alchemic Concoction|0|AVRN|Spell Card|Spell||Normal|||Target 1 face-up Normal Monster you control: Special Summon 1 Normal Monster from your Graveyard with a different Attribute and equal or lower Level than the targeted Monster. Then you can add 1 Normal Monster from your Deck to your hand with a different Attribute and equal or lower Level than any Monster you control.|

|Drag to Despair|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Normal|||Banish the 1 face-up monster your opponent controls that has the highest DEF. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.)|

|Damnation|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||During either players turn; you can pay 1500 Life Points: Negate all card effects that would add a card from a players Deck or Graveyard to their hand, until the End Phase.|

Removed: Brain Freeze, Breckons, Wandering Eye
Added: 3 Essence Monsters

So I decided to not half-ass the submission and actually submit an archetype. Removed Good Night, Meteoros Pulsar, and Legend Tyranno for Magician of the Forgotten Past, Magician of the MIraculous Rebirth, and Financial Fair Play.

Removed Lifeseed Fairy and Financial fair Play for Magician of Reversed Heart and Good Night

-Hell Hero Barbatos RK 4/6/8 

+ Maliserpent
+ Streamserpent
+ Black Lightning Eradicator

Replaced Ceci N'est Pas Une Carte by Snap-dragon-fly

DH - edit justice of ravenous, Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn (except during the draw phase).

Replaced Land of Confusion by Megalosquito

werelord - breaker and raven's discard and return effects seem overpowered with the amount of gemini's you can get banished. i would prefer that they weren't there or replaced by something less strong

also, announcement. set will close roughly 18 hours and 20 minutes from the time of this post. please ensure that your submissions are ready for that time.

Ash wrote:DH - edit justice of ravenous, Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn (except during the draw phase).

|Justice of the Ravenous|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn. |

changed to

Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn (except during the draw phase).

I'll change it for you, but is there any reason why? none was evident to me yet.

Darkest Hour wrote:

Ash wrote:DH - edit justice of ravenous, Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn (except during the draw phase).

|Justice of the Ravenous|0|AVRN|Trap Card|Trap||Continuous|||Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn. |

changed to

Activate only when your opponent draws a card, except during their Draw Phase. Draw 2 cards for every 1 card your opponent has drawn (except during the draw phase).

I'll change it for you, but is there any reason why? none was evident to me yet.

it was reworded to avoid confusion as the effect implied that you still draw cards from the effect that this card initially activate to when it really doesn't.

|Fighter Jet - Golden Arrow|0|AVRN|Machine/Xyz/Effect|Light|5||2400|2000|2 level 5 monsters Once per turn when a Trap Card is activated: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the activation and destroy it.|

|Tyrant the Vanquisher|0|AVRN|Warrior/Xyz/Effect|Dark|5||2500|1500|2 level 5 monsters This card inflicts piercing battle damage. When this card battles a monster, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the effects of all monsters your opponent controls until the end of the Damage Step and any battle damage inflicted to your opponent by this battle becomes equal to this card's ATK.|

|Astral Falcon|0|AVRN|Winged Beast/Synchro/Effect|Wind|7||2400|2000|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn when a Trap Card is activated, you can have this card lose 500 ATK and DEF: Negate the activation and destroy it.|

|Oil Elemental|0|AVRN|Aqua/Synchro/Effect|Fire|7||2400|2000|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn during either player's turn: You can have this card lose 500 ATK and DEF to target 1 monster on the field: Negate its effects until the End Phase.|

|Silent King|0|AVRN|Warrior/Xyz/Effect|Earth|6||2600|2400|2 level 6 monsters When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card: Special Summon the destroyed monster to your field.|

|Excellence Dragon|0|AVRN|Dragon/Synchro/Effect|Light|6||2400|2000|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned while you control no other cards: You can target 1 Trap Card in your Graveyard: Set it. When your opponent declares a direct attack while this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card: Negate the attack and add 1 level 3 or lower Tuner monster from your Deck to your hand.|

|Five Star General|0|AVRN|Warrior/Effect|Earth|5||2200|1800|When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 level 5 monster from your hand or Graveyard. Its effects are negated. If this effect was activated: You cannot Special Summon other monsters this turn except from the Extra Deck.|

|Mechanical Amalgam|0|AVRN|Machine/Fusion/Effect|Dark|6||0|0|2 level 4 or higher Machine-Type monsters This card gains ATK equal to the number of monsters your opponent controls x 1000. While this card has 1000 ATK or less: It cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects.|

|Palagon the Holy Dragon|0|AVRN|Dragon/Fusion/Effect|Light|8||2600|2800|1 level 5 or higher Dragon-Type monster + 1 LIGHT monster All face-up LIGHT monsters you control gain 500 ATK, except this card. When this card is Fusion Summoned: You can add 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn during your Main Phase: You can discard 1 LIGHT monster from your hand to halve the ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until the End Phase.|

|Power Buster Magician|0|AVRN|Spellcaster/Effect|Dark|1||100|100|When this card is Normal Summoned: Banish 1 monster your opponent controls. During the End Phase, if this card is face-up: Return the banished monster to its original position.|