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Post by rd389 on Sat Jul 23, 2011 9:25 am

Song Title: Bleeding Heart


i spent all my time wishing you'd come back
to me but now i see i was just wasting my
time i could of been looking for someone else
in my life

but oh no i keep on wishing you'd come back
wishing you'd come back but now im seeing
that you'll never be come back to me

oh girl you left my heart broken oh you
left me soon alone in my world oh girl
my heart is bleeding for you you left me

girl you left me to drown in my bleeding
heart you left me so alone but now girl
im asking you to pull me out of this

bleeding heart im asking to come back me
im asking you to set me free but i know
im wasting my time wasting my breath

oh no oh no i spent all my time wishing
you'd come back to me wishing you'd come
back to me but not i see im just wasting
my time i could of been looking for someone
else in my life

now im wishing for someone else
someone else to help me with
this bleeding heart this broken heart
the lonelyness you made feel when you
left me to drown in my own bleeding heart

oh girl im still wishing for you
wishing you to come back to me
come back to me iv been spending
all this time wishing for you

oh girl now i see i was just wasting
my time wishing you'd come back to me
to rescue me for my bleeding heart my
broken heart

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Post by Seattleite on Sat Jul 23, 2011 1:21 pm

hi there...

Who are you? Could you introduce yourself first?
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Post by CNo.101 S.H.Death Knight on Sat Jul 23, 2011 2:59 pm

no matter how it looks but it just reminding me of Dylan because he said bleeding heart quite a bit :/

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