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Post by God Machismo!!!!! on Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:26 pm

These focus on beatdown with the Main Deck monsters, with the Xyzs for game pushes.

Main Deck Monsters

Barbaric-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 2000
DEF 400
If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects from the hand or Graveyard, until the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Power-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1900
DEF 400
This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up monster your opponent controls. If an "-Oni" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Bashing-Oni

*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1900
DEF 400
When this monster battles an opponent's monster, unless the opponent's monster is destroyed by battle: It is returned to the top of the owner's Deck at the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Sealing-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1900
DEF 400
Monsters cannot be Special Summoned from the Main Deck. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Vanguard-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1800
DEF 400
If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster (from your Deck), other than "Vanguard-Oni". While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Aura-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1800
DEF 400
If your opponent activates a card effect that inflicts damage to you; Negate that damage, and this card gains ATK equal to that damage until your opponent's next End Phase. While this card is attached to a "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Hammer-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1800
DEF 400
If this card attacks, before damage calculation: You can target 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls; destroy that target. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Invoker-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
Once per turn, you can Normal Summon 1 "-Oni" monster in addition your Normal Summon or Set. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Curse-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
All face-up Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls lose 400 ATK and DEF for each face-up "-Oni" monster you control. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Exorcist-Oni

*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can target 1 face-up Special Summoned monster your opponent controls; this turn, this monster's effect(s) are negated. All face-up monsters you control must be FIRE Fiend-Type to activate and to resolve this effect. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Wild-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards, and cannot be targeted by effects. While this card is attached to a "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Brother-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Special Summon 1 "Brother Token" (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 400). While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Slasher-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1500
DEF 400
If you control a face-up "-Oni" monster with a different name, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect:
● If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation).

Gadget-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1500
DEF 400
If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can add 1 "-Oni" card from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Sentry-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1400
DEF 400
If an opponent's monster declares a direct attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this monster would be destroyed by battle: It is not. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect:
● Once per turn, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Each time this effect is applied, this monster loses 400 ATK and DEF at the end of the Damage Step.

Oni-Tiger
*1
FIRE
Beast/Effect
ATK 800
DEF 100
If you control a face-up "-Oni" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster gains 800 ATK and DEF. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)

Departed-Oni
*1
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 300
DEF 100
If all the monsters in your Graveyard are FIRE: You can Tribute this card to target 2 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monsters with different names in your Graveyard, except "Departed-Oni"; Special Summon those targets, but they cannot activate their effects or be used as Xyz Material this turn.

Spells/Traps

Violent-Oni
Quickplay Spell
Target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; until the End Phase, it gains 800 ATK, and if it battles an opponent's monster: That monster's effect(s) is negated until the End Phase.

Oni-Spirits
Normal Trap
Add 1 "-Oni" monster from your Deck to your hand.

Backup-Oni
Normal Trap
Can only be activated if there are 3 or more "-Oni" monsters in your Graveyard. Target up to 2 Level 3 or 4 "-Oni" Monsters in your Graveyard; add those targets to your hand.

Transcending-Oni
Normal Trap
Target 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster OR 1 "-Oni" Xyz Monster with a Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster as Xyz Material; equip this card to that target. That target is unaffected by the effects of monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect while Set: Draw 1 card.

Oni-Lightning
Normal Trap
Tribute 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control and target 2 cards your opponent controls; send them to the Graveyard.

Vengeful-Oni
Continuous Trap
Target 1 "-Oni" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target in face-up Attack Position, then, if it is an Xyz Monster, attach this card to that target as Xyz Material. When this card leaves the field, destroy that target. When that target is destroyed, destroy this card.


Extra Deck Monsters


Zen-Mugen-Oni
Rank 12
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 5000
DEF 5000
Must be Xyz Summoned by using 3 Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monsters you control that were not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Materials, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 "-Oni" monsters from your hand or Graveyard. Their effect(s) are negated, and their ATK becomes 3000, also, they cannot attack directly or be used as Xyz Material.

Dai-Kyojin-Oni
Rank 8
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 3000
DEF 2400
3 Level 8 "-Oni" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains ATK equal to the detached Xyz Material until your opponent's next End Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK is doubled.

Chaos Xyz: Bizarro-Oni*
Rank 5
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 3000
DEF 1500
3 Level 5 monsters
When this card is Xyz Summoned: Negate the effects of all other cards currently on the field. If a Rank 4 "Oni" Xyz Monster is attached to this card as an Xyz Material, this card gains this effect.
• Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy cards your opponent controls for each Xyz Material attached to this card.

*Special Summoned with Barian's Force http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rank-Up_Magic_-_Barian%27s_Force

Flameblade-Oni
Rank 5
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2600
DEF 1500
3 Level 5 "-Oni" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls.

Airblade-Oni
Rank 5
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2600
DEF 1500
3 Level 5 "-Oni" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy 2 Spell/Trap Cards your opponent controls.

Amazing-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2800
DEF 1200
3 Level 4 "-Oni" monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and, if the detached Xyz Material is an "-Oni" monster; until your next End Phase, your opponent cannot Summon monsters with ATK equal to or lower than the ATK of the detached Xyz Material in the Graveyard.

Searing-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2500
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this turn, if the monsters you control attack an opponent's monster, the opponent's battling monster's ATK is halved during the Damage Step.

Splendor-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2400
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; this turn, this card can attack every monster your opponent controls (one attack on each monster per Battle Phase).

Shamaness-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2200
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster (from your hand or Graveyard). It cannot be used as Xyz Material this turn.

Odachi-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2100
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
If you declare an attack with this card, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards or Effect Monster's effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the target monster's ATK and DEF becomes 0, and it's effect(s) are negated, also, if your opponent controls another card in the same column as the target monster, destroy it.



Last edited by God Machismo!!!!! on Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:24 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Typo with Vanguard's eff)
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Post by EMSOUP on Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:36 pm

hmm, first note first, welcome to LCCG! If you have any questions, you can post it in the Question and Help Subforum or you can PM one of the admin/moderator here.

This is the quick review of your cards
God Machismo!!!!! wrote:These focus on beatdown with the Main Deck monsters, with the Xyzs for game pushes.

Main Deck Monsters

Barbaric-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effects
ATK 2000
DEF 400
If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects from the hand or Graveyard, until the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Hmm, 2000 ATK level 4 with an effect this good is too much, in my opinion. Maaybe lower the ATK, or give it an additional restrictive effect, like "This card cannot attack your opponent directly." or "If this card is destroyed, destroy another card you control" or something like that.

Power-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1900
DEF 400
This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up monster your opponent controls. If an "-Oni" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).

Same as the above. but i think 1800 or 1700 ATK is fine for this one tbh.


Bashing-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1900
DEF 400
When this monster battles an opponent's monster, unless the opponent's monster is destroyed by battle: It is returned to the top of the owner's Deck at the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Good card. even with 1900 ATK it's effect is fine. Get rid of reapers easily.

Sealing-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1900
DEF 400
Monsters cannot be Special Summoned from the Main Deck. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Stops several decks from making their big plays while being a huge beater. I honestly like this one.

Vanguard-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1800
DEF 400
If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster (from your Deck), other than "Demoni". While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Who's "Demoni" by the way? anyway it needs a clause so it special summons a monster in DEF, and also maybe something like "Special summon a 1800 ATK or lower '-oni' monster from your deck" otherwise, a Shura is always nice.

Aura-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1800
DEF 400
If your opponent activates a card effect that inflicts damage to you; Negate that damage, and this card gains ATK equal to that damage until your opponent's next End Phase. While this card is attached to a "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Good card, although better be sided.

Hammer-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1800
DEF 400
If this card attacks, before damage calculation: You can target 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls; destroy that target. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Hmm, interesting effect. sadly doesn't protect you from mirror forces and the likes. but hitting a set Solemn/field spell/fire dance is always good.

Invoker-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
Once per turn, you can Normal Summon 1 "-Oni" monster in addition your Normal Summon or Set. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Hmm, This one allows you to spam your field in cost of hand advantage. seems fair imo.

Curse-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
All face-up Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls lose 400 ATK and DEF for each face-up "-Oni" monster you control. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
The ATK loss is too much. 200-300 will be just fine. 400 makes the already powerful oni even scarier.


Exorcist-Oni

*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can target 1 face-up Special Summoned monster your opponent controls; this turn, this monster's effect(s) are negated. All face-up monsters you control must be FIRE Fiend-Type to activate and to resolve this effect. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Good card is good. acting as a pseudo veiler is good.

Wild-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards, and cannot be targeted by effects. While this card is attached to a "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Simple but effective. Hmm, i think i should look at the Xyzs now.

Brother-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1700
DEF 400
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Special Summon 1 "Brother Token" (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 400). While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Not that useful in my opinion. maybe for an extra attack, but the token didn't do anything else.

Slasher-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1500
DEF 400
If you control a face-up "-Oni" monster with a different name, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect:
● If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation).
Hmm, need a restriction on the special summoning part, otherwise you can Xyz easily each turn with this and the trap that adds 2 onis to your hand. otherwise, ATK and effect seems fine.

Gadget-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1500
DEF 400
If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can add 1 "-Oni" card from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s).
Need a bit more ATK to be better. Solid effect, but 1500 wont run over anything except with Curse-oni or other outside help.

Sentry-Oni
*4
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 1400
DEF 400
If an opponent's monster declares a direct attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this monster would be destroyed by battle: It is not. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect:
● Once per turn, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Each time this effect is applied, this monster loses 400 ATK and DEF at the end of the Damage Step.
Seems good for an OTK stopper. once per turn is fine, it makes it balanced.

Oni-Tiger
*1
FIRE
Beast/Union/Effect
ATK 800
DEF 100
If you control a face-up "-Oni" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster gains 800 ATK and DEF. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)
Fixed. Hmm, interesting support. but i don't think it is that useful, since most card searches "-Oni" not "Oni-", so the potential to be a dead draw is big, and it's not reliable.

Departed-Oni
*1
FIRE
Fiend/Effect
ATK 300
DEF 100
If all the monsters in your Graveyard are FIRE: You can Tribute this card to target 2 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monsters with different names in your Graveyard, except "Departed-Oni"; Special Summon those targets, but they cannot activate their effects or be used as Xyz Material this turn.
Infernity Mirage with more restrictions. Hmm, mixed feelings on this one. The effect is great, but needs setup, and the last clause balanced it. But seems like this archetype doesn't care that much, since all the great ones have 1700+ ATK. at least it's not abusable.

Spells/Traps

Violent-Oni
Quickplay Spell
Target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; until the End Phase, it gains 800 ATK, and if it battles an opponent's monster: That monster's effect(s) is negated until the End Phase.
Hmm, great effect, since 800 is significant, and the ability to stomp over recruiter is good. but imo, 600 is fine though, since onis have great ATKs by default.

Oni-Spirits
Normal Trap
Add 1 "-Oni" monster from your Deck to your hand.
Good, balanced searcher. helps improves this deck's speed.

Backup-Oni
Normal Trap
Can only be activated if there are 3 or more "-Oni" monsters in your Graveyard. Target up to 2 Level 3 or 4 "-Oni" Monsters in your Graveyard; add those targets to your hand.
hmm, a salvage. seems balanced enough, but i don't think oni fill the grave easily, so this card has a potential to be dead.

Transcending-Oni
Normal Trap
Target 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster OR 1 "-Oni" Xyz Monster with a Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster as Xyz Material; equip this card to that target. That target is unaffected by the effects of monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect while Set: Draw 1 card.
Punishes blind MST/heavy storm. the monster effect protection is good. other than that, still great since it's chainable to things like Ryko.

Oni-Lightning
Normal Trap
Tribute 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control and target 2 cards your opponent controls; send them to the Graveyard.
Too risky imo, since with this wording, it's like Offerings to the snake deity, if one of the target is removed from the field, this card would fizzle and didn't destroy the other target. But correct me if I'm wrong though.

Vengeful-Oni
Continuous Trap
Target 1 "-Oni" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target in face-up Attack Position, then, if it is an Xyz Monster, attach this card to that target as Xyz Material. When this card leaves the field, destroy that target. When that target is destroyed, destroy this card.
A themed COTH that can functions as a Xyz reborn. Still need a way to put things into the grave though, otherwise the use will be more limited.

Extra Deck Monsters


Zen-Mugen-Oni
Rank 12
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 5000
DEF 5000
Must be Xyz Summoned by using 3 Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monsters you control that were not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Materials, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 "-Oni" monsters from your hand or Graveyard. Their effect(s) are negated, and their ATK becomes 3000, also, they cannot attack directly or be used as Xyz Material.
Whoa, it's a big one. Almost unstoppable if you managed to get it out, and the second effect is great. It's a great boss card, of course, but with the deck's speed, almost impossible to get out before the duel is over.

Dai-Kyojin-Oni
Rank 8
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 3000
DEF 2400
3 Level 8 "-Oni" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains ATK equal to the detached Xyz Material until your opponent's next End Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK is doubled.
Hmm, i'm a bit worried with this one, since it's easy to summon. if you have one copy in your grave and once copy in your field, you can have a 7500+ beater, far scarier than Excalibur and makes OTKs far easier. also, the last effect makes most of the onis unrunnable, so maybe have their ATK doubled only when attacking/battling a monster.

Chaos Xyz: Bizarro-Oni*
Rank 5
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 3000
DEF 1500
3 Level 5 monsters
When this card is Xyz Summoned: Negate the effects of all other cards currently on the field. If a Rank 4 "Oni" Xyz Monster is attached to this card as an Xyz Material, this card gains this effect.
• Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy cards your opponent controls for each Xyz Material attached to this card.
Good effect, far better than most Chaos Xyz monsters currently released. but, aren't 3000 ATK a bit too much?

*Special Summoned with Barian's Force http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rank-Up_Magic_-_Barian%27s_Force

Flameblade-Oni
Rank 5
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2600
DEF 1500
3 Level 5 "-Oni" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls.
Too broken. it's easy to summon, and its 1 for 2 effect just too powerful. maybe increase the cost of its effect.

Airblade-Oni
Rank 5
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2600
DEF 1500
3 Level 5 "-Oni" Monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy 2 Spell/Trap Cards your opponent controls.
Same as above.

Amazing-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2800
DEF 1200
3 Level 4 "-Oni" monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and, if the detached Xyz Material is an "-Oni" monster; until your next End Phase, your opponent cannot Summon monsters with ATK equal to or lower than the ATK of the detached Xyz Material in the Graveyard.
Hmm, powerful lock, but it's hard to summon, and have several ways to get around it. 2800 is solid, maybe a little bit too much. overall, it's a powerful, but fine card.

Searing-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2500
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this turn, if the monsters you control attack an opponent's monster, the opponent's battling monster's ATK is halved during the Damage Step.
great effect. but again with the power level. this makes summoning a monster in ATK position is suicidal for your opponent.

Splendor-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2400
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; this turn, this card can attack every monster your opponent controls (one attack on each monster per Battle Phase).
Fine effect, but unless your opponent sets a lot of monster, Searing-oni is better.

Shamaness-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2200
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster (from your hand or Graveyard). It cannot be used as Xyz Material this turn.
It's a she? anyway, effect seems good, but the same question on graveyard set-up. This card makes things like foolish quite necessary for the deck.

Odachi-Oni
Rank 4
FIRE
Fiend/Xyz/Effect
ATK 2100
DEF 800
2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters
If you declare an attack with this card, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards or Effect Monster's effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the target monster's ATK and DEF becomes 0, and it's effect(s) are negated, also, if your opponent controls another card in the same column as the target monster, destroy it.
Hmm, it can make an unholy OTK with the rank 8 oni. Basically, this is a far better exclusive potoknight paladius.

Conclusion: Holy, the power level! the ATK of most of the the onis and their powerful effects makes this archetype leaning towards being broken. Usually, an archetype have several cards that is filling the role as a beatstick, the rest is combo pieces with mediocre to miniscule power. this arcetype has most everyone being a beatstick, and also a utility card. an archetype in TCG that's close to this one is Koaki meiru, and it needs the end phase self destruct effect to make the cards balanced.

If we excludes the ATK of the monsters from consideration, we have a solid archetype that is a bit slow in the early game. can't fill the grave easily, so most combo cards need time to be useful. But with the ATK of those monsters, we have an insanely dangerous archetype that needs to be defeated early in order to avoid being crushed.

Well, that's my view on this archetype, maybe you can think of a solution for this problem.
That's all for me now.
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Post by Anime Girl References on Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:02 pm

They seem very well rounded and extremely effective, but I'm sure if this was released into one of our sets it would rule over anything else anyone could make, making other decks completely obsolete, which would take the fun out of making cards. Nothing here has the same caliber as the Onis, so playing against them with non-Onis would be gruesome considering they aren't balanced.

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Post by EMSOUP on Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:20 pm

phew, finished the review. that's a lot of text.
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Post by God Machismo!!!!! on Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:25 pm

Typo. "Demoni" is "Vanguard-Oni". I forgot to change the name in the effect.
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